The Loop

The Loop

(2m)   by ballekumar

Comedy Skits   (46800 Views 11 Comments)

Mom1: My kid ate an apple and I shouted at him.

Mom2: Why?

Mom1: He snatched that apple from his classmate. Stealing is bad.

Mom2: So what?

Mom1: Before taking the apple he beat the poor boy a lot.

Mom2: Its okk sometimes it happens.

Mom1: It was his apple and he put it in the hands of the other boy first.

Mom2: Ok! Must be some fruit then.

Mom1: It was an imaginary apple that he kept in his friends hand.

Mom2: Imaginary apple!!

Yes , I was cutting that apple and he stole it from me.

Mom2: You were cutting an imaginary apple.

Mom1: Yes, with an imaginary knife

Mom2: Why is that so?

Mom1: I can't hold a knife.

Mom2: Why can't you?

Mom1: My hands pass through the knife.

Mom2: What?

Mom1: Yes this is being happening since the day I died.

Mom2:  What, you are not alive?

Mom1: No I am not , why does that surprise you?

Mom2: I am surprised that I can communicate with dead people.

Mom1: Of Course ! You can.

Mom2: Why?

Mom1: Because you died an hour ago 

Ohh No!!

Mom1: I am kidding silly

Mom2: Thank God

Mom1: You died 50 years ago

Mom2: No !!

Yes you did , this shopping complex where you shop daily is named after you.

Mom2: That I am shopping daily proves that I am alive

Mom1: Women shop even when they are dead and shop more when they are dead, because now they have all the time in the world and don't have to pay for it. 

Mom2: Am I really dead?

Mom1: Not really , it is like you are stuck in a limbo 

Mom2: So what should I do to get out of limbo

Mom1: i don't know , I myself am in one

Mom2: So why did you tell me this?

Mom1: i guess i was jealous of being the ghost who shops and me being the ghost who nags

Mom2: So you now made me aware that I am a ghost

Mom1: Yes

Mom2: What next?

Mom1: I will leave now

Mom2: Your son!

Mom1: He is not my son

Mom2: Who is he?

Mom1: Who knows?

Mom2: Why did you shout at him?


Mom1: My kid ate an apple and I shouted at him.

Mom2: Why?

.... loop continues ...

This mall has been closed because of some supernatural activity been reported for quite some time.

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Submitted by futurelawyer2 on Thu, 12/22/2011 - 09:43
hey i really love this script may i use it for my debate finals?? please and you are very talented :) god bless..... and don't even say it because i will give you FULL CREDIT!! :)
Submitted by faatymaa on Thu, 12/22/2011 - 23:47
hahah wow, i reallly REALLY loved this scipt, you have done an amazing job, ofcourse if you dont mind id like to make a short cartoon film on this.. just for fun! i will give all credits to you dont worry and i would love to show you it when im done :) please get back to me so i that i know if i can start on it P.S you have talent so keep up your writing skills, honeslty i would love to be able to have such a creative mind. :)
Submitted by ballekumar on Fri, 12/23/2011 - 01:35
Hi Lisa, Thanks. Please use it in any way you like. Thanks for reading the script and appreciating my work. You can even modify the script to suit your need. God bless you. Regards Balle Kumar
Submitted by ballekumar on Fri, 12/23/2011 - 01:38
Hi faatmaa, Thank you for your appreciation. Thank you for taking time to write a comment. Yes please use the script any way you like and you are free to modify it to suit your need. Thanks. God has given the gift to be funny and I want to use it bring happiness to people's life. Regards Balle
Submitted by Khushi Mehta (not verified) on Sun, 09/02/2012 - 01:22
Please can I use the the script for my school project It will be pleasure if you allow
Submitted by bkuniverse on Sun, 09/02/2012 - 02:03
@Khushi Mehta. You can use it. Please give the credit of the script to "Balle Kumar's Universe" if possible.
Submitted by Khushi Mehta (not verified) on Wed, 09/05/2012 - 03:57
surely of course
Submitted by Bubba (not verified) on Fri, 05/24/2013 - 17:02
May I please use this for debate?
Submitted by ballekumar on Sat, 05/25/2013 - 06:05
@Bubba, Yes you can. Thanks.
Submitted by Desirae Mausteller (not verified) on Sat, 11/16/2013 - 09:55
Hello Balle Kumar! Let me just start off by saying how much my co star and I loved your script! coincidentally we are in an up coming educational show for our college and were wondering if we could use your script "The Loop" in our show?
Submitted by ballekumar on Sun, 11/17/2013 - 16:32
@Desirae Mausteller Please feel free to use any of my scripts.

2m Comedy Skits - The Loop